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New paragraph = New T ime, P lace, T opic, or P erson (TiPToP).

Mix short, punchy sentences for tension with longer, descriptive ones for flow. "Silence fell. Then, a bang." 11.part2.rar

Do you have a specific or title (e.g., "The Secret Door")? New paragraph = New T ime, P lace,

Which part do you find the hardest: the essay or finishing it? New paragraph = New T ime

Instead of saying "He was scared," describe the physical signs of fear. "She was very cold."